Comments on: MitsuiSelphie’s Fan Fic Clinic Opens http://www.dopaminefics.com/mitsuiselphies-fan-fic-clinic/ PoT Dream Novels & Slam Dunk Fan Fiction Wed, 07 Jan 2009 02:08:56 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: MitsuiSelphie http://www.dopaminefics.com/mitsuiselphies-fan-fic-clinic/comment-page-1/#comment-34 MitsuiSelphie Thu, 08 Nov 2007 17:17:23 +0000 http://www.dopaminefics.com/mitsuiselphies-fan-fic-clinic/#comment-34 Great question, Sia. Frankly, I thought I was only going to get simple newbie questions. However, your query will greatly benefit writers of varying levels so I'll address it this weekend. :D The Fan Fic Clinic will be open only for a limited time, guys. So post your questions before I feel like I've gotten enough to answer for quite some time. Great question, Sia. Frankly, I thought I was only going to get simple newbie questions. However, your query will greatly benefit writers of varying levels so I’ll address it this weekend. :D

The Fan Fic Clinic will be open only for a limited time, guys. So post your questions before I feel like I’ve gotten enough to answer for quite some time.

]]> By: Sia http://www.dopaminefics.com/mitsuiselphies-fan-fic-clinic/comment-page-1/#comment-32 Sia Thu, 08 Nov 2007 16:09:13 +0000 http://www.dopaminefics.com/mitsuiselphies-fan-fic-clinic/#comment-32 Wow, that's very kind of you... I used to write fanfics earlier on FF.net (and got a review a few days ago about one I wrote back in '03 that I discontinued). I'm wondering how one can write expressively and excitingly (sp?), in order to make the reader moved and want to continued to read? Sometimes I feel that I have problems with that, that the text doesn't move the story along so much... Wow, that’s very kind of you… I used to write fanfics earlier on FF.net (and got a review a few days ago about one I wrote back in ‘03 that I discontinued).

I’m wondering how one can write expressively and excitingly (sp?), in order to make the reader moved and want to continued to read? Sometimes I feel that I have problems with that, that the text doesn’t move the story along so much…

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